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Feb. 6th, 2011

I've got two stories that need a little looking over by eyes other than mine:
And Still Champion is just shy of 7000 words
Jimmy Plays the Long Game is around 3500 words

If anyone has some free time and wouldn't mind giving them a read, let me know. :)

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mcsnapdragon
Feb. 7th, 2011 05:47 pm (UTC)
Sure. Any and all. Results by Saturday night GUARANTEED!
katsudon
Feb. 7th, 2011 10:46 pm (UTC)
Oooh, or I get my money back? XD
mcsnapdragon
Feb. 7th, 2011 10:50 pm (UTC)
If you return the unused portion.
boggyb
Feb. 7th, 2011 07:14 pm (UTC)
What's the setting/genre? And what sort of reading/critique are you after?
katsudon
Feb. 7th, 2011 10:48 pm (UTC)
Both are "speculative" fiction, of the fantasy variety. And Still Champion is second world fantasy, Jimmy Plays the Long Game is generic 1920s-ish America.
katsudon
Feb. 7th, 2011 10:50 pm (UTC)
Oh yes. And... generally I'm looking for critiques on the story/characterization/etc. I'll also happily take people pointing out my funky grammar, but that I'm a lot less worried about than just the general question of if the story works.
boggyb
Feb. 8th, 2011 06:03 pm (UTC)
I'm in a fantasy mood, so how about And Still Champion then? I'm not going to try and match mcsnapdragon's offer, but I'll try and get feedback to you sooner rather than later.
sealwhiskers
Feb. 8th, 2011 04:44 am (UTC)
Gimme one of 'em. I'm home sick anyway and it sucks.
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